Thank you so much for reading, and this awesome feedback!!
I was hopeful those lil directions have effect!
I agree on the OS System thang- got redundant in attempt to get the reader feeling within the backend of their own original sensory systems 😆 but perhaps trying too hard there.
There were a lot of great moments in this one for me.
> Allow yourself to focus on your interior like a big screen, your favourite color washing over all your sensories.
I could feel my body lightly tingling, sort of like an hum in the room of the imaginal space.
> Turn the saturation slider to increase a sense of vividness.
For some reason, the "increase a sense of vividness" literally made things feel more vivid in that moment. Great suggestion!
> You hear the sound effect of sparkles shooting across the internal space
That one worked! They have an ethereal quality to them, vivid, but weightless.
> guide the Imagination muscularly
Reminds me of Michael Edward Johnson!
The channel previews were quite nice, too. Some of them were clearer than others.
One minor nitpick: I think "OS system" is redundant. 😅
I love "even your own perception of what's divine" — it *is* subjective and personal, isn't it?
Thank you so much for reading, and this awesome feedback!!
I was hopeful those lil directions have effect!
I agree on the OS System thang- got redundant in attempt to get the reader feeling within the backend of their own original sensory systems 😆 but perhaps trying too hard there.
Ohhhh, Original Sensory Systems—that makes sense. I misread the acronym!